43221 Darlington, Queen Elizabeth

Thursday 3 March 2011

Final Project







Rough Cut Feedback






I think that the thing i will improve the most on my front cover is the amount of sell lines as this is what most people have told me that needs improving. On my contents page I still need images for it as I have not had enough time to get them yet as the people who said they would be on it were ill on the day of the photo-shoot. On my double-page spread I will be adding some quotes so it doesn't look as bare and i will also need to be finishing my article.